Chapter 10

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Sorry for the long wait, i kinda lost my phone and i have the fanfic there so i had to look for it and i just found it lol

i cant write any dedications on my phone app so I'll just write it in this A/N

This chapter is dedicated to thatlonelyperson bc you are the only one who comments all the time and votes and ily xx

"HARRY!" Louis yelled in fear, taking the steering wheel and moving the car back, he knew that Harry was in shock so as much as he wanted to yell at him, he couldn't "Harry, are you okay?" He asked after a few minutes of silence, seeing that Harry just nodded, he knew that he was too exhausted to drive for another hour "stop here" he said pointing at a motel's parking lot

Harry drove to the parking lot and stopped the engine "are you okay Lou?" He asked

"Yeah" Louis said "do you want us to stay here tonight?" He asked looking at his boyfriend, who nodded "what was that? You said that you'd be okay to drive, I knew you weren't but you wouldn't listen to me"

Louis looked at the motel and his blood froze.

It was a small and old two stories building made of wooden, him and Harry walked towards the door before the youngest spoke "what if there are fans? They could find out about us" he said stopping in his tracks

"Says the guy who wanted to come out this morning and threatened his 'boss' because of that" Louis said sarcastically

Harry sighted as he reached for Louis' hand, but the older boy rejected the offer as he opened the door and walked inside "room for two?" The old lady, they guess it was the receptionist, said when she saw them

Harry opened his mouth to answer but Louis was faster "um, no, two separate rooms please" he said smiling at the woman as she handed them the keys

Harry frowned, what was wrong with Louis? Two separate rooms? It was almost Christmas for fuck's sake, did he mess up earlier? He was trying to make Louis happy by taking him to the fountain where they had their first kiss four years ago

Harry didn't say anything, he just took his room's keys and followed Louis up the stairs, once they reached the first room- which was Louis' - they stopped and Harry grabbed the older boy's wrist before he could get inside his room, making him turn to face him

"Louis, why did you asked for two rooms?" Harry asked looking down to his boyfriend

"You're the one who was worried for the fans, it's not because you almost kill us both, don't worry" Louis said sarcastically "would you please let me go to my room now?"

"Hey, I'm sorry, okay? I messed up, I shouldn't have lied to you, I just wanted to make you happy" Harry started "I didn't want any of this to happen and I just wanted to make sure that I'd see a big smile on your face tonight" He really needed Louis to forgive him even though he knew it wouldn't be easy for neither of them to forget this "so tomorrow early we're leaving and I don't care if you don't want to come because you are coming" he said leaning in to kiss Louis

But something, or more like someone cut him...

"What's going on here?" A voice, which Louis and Harry knew too well, yelled

Im sure you all know who that voice is but i wanted to finish the chapter with the worst cliffhanger ever

Y'all thought they were going to crash and go to the hospital haha, that was the plan but it would be too cliche and i wanted to make it a bit more interesting, i failed miserably but anyway, i like it so

I love you, comment your thoughts, and whats going to happen next, i will try to update tomorrow even though im going to see my best friend after a month lol

Mire x

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