𝑾𝑨𝑽𝑬𝑺 || 𝑨𝒂𝒏𝒈 (𝑩𝒐𝒐𝒌 1) *Revamping

Waves

Hey...

If you're new here, welcome! Thank you for clicking on this story!

If you're rereading (for whatever reason), welcome back and thank you for it!

So it's been 5 years since this story was published. 2 (I think) since I finished editing. And yet, I keep coming back to it. This is the first story I published and completed, and Jade has my whole heart. But every time I read it, I cringe because of the differences between my writing then and my writing now. Sometimes I read a sentence and ask myself what possessed me to type that.

Which is why I'm back. I've edited this story several times over the years, but this time I'm planning a full revamping. As in going through and rewriting everything to make it less cringey, as well giving Jade more depth. Compared to book 3 Jade, book 1 Jade needs just...more. She's written by high school me and it shows.

So if you're rereading, or even if you're just bored, I encourage you to start from the beginning! I won't unpublished the chapters as they are now, but I'll be going through and changing them. I promise it's almost like a new story (with the same plot, characters, etc). Jade will still be Jade as you know her, but she'll be explored a lot more from the beginning. I want to make her more realistic as a thirteen year old girl, and that means exploring her strengths and flaws a little more than I originally did.

The intro and first four chapters have already been completed, and I'm working on the next ones right now! You might notice that I added new scenes and changed some dialogue, which is what I plan to do for the rest of the book. Revamped chapters will have a * in the title, and they will say that they've been re-edited (rather than just edited), so look out for those!

Hope you enjoy!