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Hey...

If you're new here, welcome! Thank you for clicking on this story!

If you're rereading (for whatever reason), welcome back and thank you for it!

So it's been 5 years since this story was published. 2 (I think) since I finished editing. And yet, I keep coming back to it. This is the first story I published and completed, and Jade has my whole heart. But every time I read it, I cringe because of the differences between my writing then and my writing now. Sometimes I read a sentence and ask myself what possessed me to type that.

Which is why I'm back. I've edited this story several times over the years, but this time I'm planning a full revamping. As in going through and rewriting everything to make it less cringey, as well giving Jade more depth. Compared to book 3 Jade, book 1 Jade needs just...more. She's written by high school me and it shows.

So if you're rereading, or even if you're just bored, I encourage you to start from the beginning! I won't unpublished the chapters as they are now, but I'll be going through and changing them. I promise it's almost like a new story (with the same plot, characters, etc). Jade will still be Jade as you know her, but she'll be explored a lot more from the beginning. I want to make her more realistic as a thirteen year old girl, and that means exploring her strengths and flaws a little more than I originally did.

The intro and first four chapters have already been completed, and I'm working on the next ones right now! You might notice that I added new scenes and changed some dialogue, which is what I plan to do for the rest of the book. Revamped chapters will have a * in the title, and they will say that they've been re-edited (rather than just edited), so look out for those!

Hope you enjoy!

𝑾𝑨𝑽𝑬𝑺 || 𝑨𝒂𝒏𝒈 (𝑩𝒐𝒐𝒌 1) *RevampingWhere stories live. Discover now