The first entry is Hippocampus by .
This story was very intriguing and made me very interested for most of the story. The small details added all over the place gave the story character, and the idea that most of his experiences in the room were not real at all were very interesting.
However, the twist ending didn't really work. It didn't really go with the rest of the story, and wasn't really explained. Also, the scientific what-not got me a bit confused and drug on for a long time.
Score: 7.5/10
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Fantasy Short Story Contest
Short StoryWelcome to the world of magic and mystery and realms beyond your imagination! This is the first Fantasy short story contest on my profile, and any entry is welcome, whether it is an already existing story or if you write it now that you know about t...
