My Art Book

Crappy Lil Underfell Toriel sketch

can you guys do me a favor please? i've got lots of practice on my art but.. not so much on my writing skill..

i've done a thing with it, i'm attempting to be better at it. so could you guys maybe read chapter 1 of underfell for me? i'm accepting criticizm no matter how terrible

thanks for whoever listens and does so ^-^ i'll go write chapter 2 rn, bai