A/N: This is an acrostic poem written in iambic pentameter (ten syllables in a line). Any feedback is greatly appreciated since I'm thinking about entering this in a competition.
Now you’ve crossed the line, point of no return
Obscuring a clear path to victory
Why did you desert us in times of need?
Yearning to see your familiar face
Overt shakes of the head, bountiful tears
Underlying resentment for your choice
Voraciously stealing what is not ours
Endangering entire families
Ceaseless begs and shouts, only an echo
Rendering all strong defenses useless
Obvious glimpse of you siding with them
Sealing both our fates for eternity
Sworn enemies starting right this second
Ending our once inseparable bond
Danger lurking around every corner
Threatening to kill poor, innocent souls
Half-hearted attempts to fend off evil
Entering a new world with suffering
Left and right, people dropping like small flies
Initiating a full-blown bloodbath
Never breaking through your cold demeanor
Eating my will to fight another day
