Intruder

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with every step i tread i'm fearful

making sure that i was careful

of this mess i knew i was getting into

for i was always the one heartache caught up to

checking into every room

peeping for shadows that loom

seeking for intruders

fearing for stealers

then you broke through the window

and landed on your feet like a hero

but from the very first sight

i knew you were a fright

flashing a breath taking smile

in a second you weren't within a mile

but an inch, no a centimeter

and then i wonder how you have come nearer

your lips shadow over mine with mock

a tentative touch, then a passionate lock

my knees weaken at your taste

i pull you nearer without haste

i noticed there was something wrong

realizing the poison on your tongue

i push you back, sensing danger

but you whisper my name, making me waver

closing my eyes, i savor your heat

your taste, your feel, i couldn't resist

then i felt something sharp at my side

laughing wickedly, you jab with all your might

i fall to the ground

my vision starting to cloud

you bend over and kissed me once more

before taking the treasure within my core

i bang my head on the wall

as my cries carry down the hall

i close my eyes as i breathe in deep

trying to stop the tears i weep

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Well this is something new. I'm never one to write the "traditional way" but it was fun and very challenging to write this. Great way to spend a night with shitty wifi connection :D

Dedicated to Dominic (SimbaSnickers) :))

EDIT: Okay I should probably explain one thing about this poem. The part about the intruder taking the treasure within the girl's core means that he had ripped out her heart. He killed her, or at least left her in so much pain (the last stanza lol but we all know that she would be dead if this is real life but c'mon this is poetry). That's why if you read the description, the quote has a part that says "when you broke my chest.".

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