Rejected at first sight

Hi wAz up anyways this is my first story so sorry if it sucks I need comments so I can have feedback and u can give me ideas
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Taylor Williams : 5,9, curly long brown hair ,tan , 18 years old , blue ish green eyes.her wolfs name is Delilah

Brandon posey: 6,3 curly dark brown hair yellow eyes 19 years of age and very popular.his wolfs name is James

Holland reed: 5,7 long blonde hair purple eyes with black specks 17 years of age.her wolfs name is stormy

Taylor's mom Melissa:5,8 short brown hair, brown eyes with blue specks, 33 years old looks like 20. her wolfs name Jamie.

Taylor's dad Jacob : 6,5 yea he's tall. Blonde short hair like Niall horan black eyes white specks,34 years old looks 25 his wolfs name is tanner.

Daniel sharmen: 6,4 short brown hair brown eyes he's nine teen years old and his wolfs name is Isaac.

There r going to be more people but there going to be later and I'll explain them later so yea I'll be updating every Monday and Friday. ok I'm gonna update later so yea