The Arrival

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Hey guys I'm new here so I,  criticism is accepted but please make it constructive, please criticize me about the characters personality if I got it pretty bad.

It was a normal day in beerus' planet, beerus was sitting on a chair under a tree

"Oiiii!! Whis I get me more "Beerus said

"Yes Beerus sama"Whis then uses his staff to give Beerus more Ramen.

"You know whis"while eatin ramen

"Yes"

"I sort of feel like doing some destruction all of a sudden"beerus said while gulping down some noodles

"Hmm, Beerus sama you should  try the food of the planet first before you destroy them" Whis said

"Hmm maybe, search for a planet that looks like it can give me delicious food"beerus said finishing his cup ramen

"Yes Beerus sama"Whis began searching for a planet with his staff he then projected a planet the looked like earth.

"Oi whis thats just Earth"

"No, it looks like Earth Beerus sama but its different from the Earth we know, it still has humans so they must know how to make great food"Whis said.

"Hmm you make a good point, and its Earth without Goku or anyone I know so I can destroy it anytime. Have they travelled beyond their planet?

" Not that far" Whis said

"Hmm"Beerus was thinking with his fingers on his chin"alright, Whis how long will it take to get there?

"10 minutes "Whis said

"Whis go pack some snacks, then we go"Beerus said

"Yes Beerus sama" Whis then packs some snacks and after that they left for this different Earth.

10 minutes later

"beerus sama we're here"Whis said

"alright lets go see if they can compete the food bulma gives us"beerus said

"Oh I wish! "Whis said happily

They land on top of a building

"Oi! You down there! Take us to the nearest restaraunt or else." Beerus said

"M-M-MONSTERS!!!"The guy screamed

"AAAHHHHH!!!!"The people panicked and started to run away

"Where's a hero when we need one?!?!!"one of the people said

"Hmm I knew I was scary but this is sort of suprising. Oi Whis do I have something on my face?"Beerus said

"No"Whis said, after he said that they jump off the building landing on the road

"Oi you monsters"a voice said

A man with a black and yellow tank top appeared

"OHHHH!! It's tank top tiger" a guy in the crowed said

"And look its his brother tank top black hole" a woman said

"Calm down citizens we will get this filthy animals out of our to-"
Tank top tiger was cut off after beerus kicked him sending
him flying through several buildings

"LITTLE BRO!!!" Tank top black hole screamed

The crowed gasped

"You Filths better learn to respect me I'm giving you a chance to make me not destroy your planet and thats what you say"Beerus said angrily

"I'll Kill you for hurting my brother"black hole said

"Is that so, I'm giving you the opportunity to try"beerus said smirking

"AHHHH"Black hole charged at beerus trying to hit him but beerus kept dodging with his hands at his back

This time Beerus caught his fist and Beerus raised his hand to black hole's face his face facing Beerus' palm

"Weakling, destruction"Beerus said

Black hole screamed as he turned into pink particles

"B-B-Black H-Hole he's-" a guy said

"and all of you are next"beerus said while charging a purple and white attack and firing it at crowed killing them and destroying a lot of buildings in the process.

"Beerus sama do you want to destroy the planet already? "Whis asked

" Not yet I'll teach these humans some respect, by maybe destroying them to near extinction"Beerus said, "but first I'm sort of hungry"

"look Beerus sama it looks like a mini-mart"Whis said

"Hmm you're right, alright short break"after beerus said that they went in and ate some snacks

"Hey Whis whats this long meat thing? "Beerus asked

" Its called a hotdog you also put some kind of sauce called ketchup and mustard"Whis said

"Hmm"After looking at it for a few seconds Beerus takes a bite
"YUMMMM!!!" beerus was just about to take another bite then suddenly a sword pierced his hotdog and stuck on the wall

"Enjoy that last bite it will be your last"A man that looks like in his forty's and has a ponytail appeared

"You will pay for what you did to my tank top brothers"a man in a tank top said

"So thats how it is huh you dare stop me from eating"Beerus said" don't worry you'll join the trash I killed soon"

A few minutes ago

"Sitch sir black hole and tank top tiger has been killed"a man in a suit said nervously

" W-What!?!"Sitch said

"Sir we have detected a very powerful energy coming from city L,  lots of civilian casualties and destroyed buildings"the man said

"Set the threat level to dragon and send an alert to all cities and heroes"Sitch said

"Yes sir"

"sounds like the enemy is a dragon level" a voice said

"Yes it killed a b and c class heroes and destroyed a lot of buildings that had people in them"sitch said

"I'm going"the voice said

"No Atomic Samurai you cant go there alone!!"sitch said

"he's not going alone"another voice said

"tank top master you must understand this all happened in just the span of 3 minutes the monster is too strong"Sitch said worringly

"I understand your concerns Sitch but we can't delay while that thing keeps killing more people, and I also want to avenge my tank top brothers"Tank top master said

" *sigh* fine but if you can't beat it retreat we will need to make a plan" Sitch said

"Understood now lets go atomic Samurai " tank top master daid

" Yeah lets show that monster how strong we heroes are"Samurai said

Well thats the first chapter looking forward to the reviews

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