After reading the one page that you have up already I'm amazed.
Your descriptive writing is beautiful, the suspense takes a person's breath away.
It feels like I'm actually in the story!
I found a few grammatical errors but nothing major. And someone had already pointed them out in the comments.
I'm not one for vampire stories because I find they end up smutty.
But I'm planning on continuing to read this story!
Good job paper_writes !
See next entry!
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Altelein this book I'm reviewing other people's stories and books private message me to have me check your book out! ( please don't ask me to review books that are rated mature content or have lots of swearing or sexual scenes
