I was experimenting with endings here- leave comments, I'd love to know what you thought. I'm a fan of psychological thrillers, but it'd be good to know if my ending was too drastic or out-of-character, and I'll consider changing it.
Thank you so much for reading, I hope you found the story exciting. I tried my best to keep it interesting, even though sometimes I might have gotten carried away with dramatic irony. My other story varies immensely but I'm planning to continue writing and exploring different genres.
Criticism is appreciated. Thanks again for reading!
-Annelise
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Life as a Number
Mystery / ThrillerThis story was inspired by the terrifying events of the Cleveland kidnappings. The story describes a girl who is known by a number, and endures gruesome chores given to her by her murderous uncle. Once assigned to the assassination of a young boy...
