character review for vee

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vee belongs to horrorscope- !!!!!

i had to use screenshots so it's a bit obnoxious to read sorry ; i'm just going to make salty comments and pretend i know what i'm doing

i had to use screenshots so it's a bit obnoxious to read sorry ; i'm just going to make salty comments and pretend i know what i'm doing

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nice name! and anything is better than sixteen. what do you mean by change his age, though? his mental state, or just literally appearing older?

 what do you mean by change his age, though? his mental state, or just literally appearing older?

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pretty solid personality! and this may just be an alteration of character through development, but in EVER he seemed p chill and friendly towards people in general - has this changed because/since jeff came into his life? him being cold toward str...

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pretty solid personality! and this may just be an alteration of character through development, but in EVER he seemed p chill and friendly towards people in general - has this changed because/since jeff came into his life? him being cold toward strangers also kind of contradicts him being social, but the bit about him exhibiting animal behaviors is neat!

having a shapeshifter - especially a human being turned alongside him having a serial killer semi-boyfriend -  can be a risky move, but from what i've read you've kept it as realistic as that kind of power can get. it'd be interesting to know if using his powers has any sort of strain on him.

good complex relationship!!

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good complex relationship!!

mixing in ocs with canon characters can get a little weird but this is good

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mixing in ocs with canon characters can get a little weird but this is good

a good balance! though it does say in his personality that he doesn't like sharing people, including his mom - does he not like her or was that aimed more for his dad?

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a good balance! though it does say in his personality that he doesn't like sharing people, including his mom - does he not like her or was that aimed more for his dad?

so yeah, vee's pretty neat! it'd be nice to include how his backstory and the continuation into EVER and beyond has affected him and his personality, but nice job, my dude.

if anyone else has characters they'd like a review of that'd be neat!

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