I am alone in the middle of the ocean
I feel like there is something pulling me under
The ocean matches my emotion
Raging and full of thunder
I am reaching for my last breath
My ankle is tied to a weight
Everyone is certain for death
I wish I could start from a clean slate
Nobody is around to help
Nobody is around to hurt
My feet are near the kelp
My feet are near the dirt
For help I make a call
Nobody was busy
But I did not get an answer at all
This whirlpool is making me dizzy
Soon I will give up
But I put in all I had
And I did not have backup
This is all kind of sad
Once I am at the end
When this is all be over with
There is a message I need to send
I was slowly drowning.
This is my first poem everyone, please tell me how I can improve!
JIMILZ
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Death on the inside
Poetry"The ocean matches my emotion, raging and full of thunder"