A New Beginning for a Dog

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JavierJ1913

(I've decided on making sections of my chapters to describe each piece of the book. For example ^. Tell me what you think)

Cover pluses: Honestly, I've been on Wattpad for over a year now, and I rarely, if ever, se the title if a book, on the side of a book and not the front/middle/bottom of the cover. I find this very creative.

Cover negatives: Really, there are none. The cover is creative and original so whoever made it, whether it was you or someone else, splendid job. The cover plays a role in drawing readers in to read.

Summary pluses: It pulls the dog lovers in. Any story about a dog going on adventures. Now, I haven't yet read it, and I think the Summary explains to story pretty well.

Beginning: All I noticed was it repeated the word "World" a lot during that first paragraph.

Middle: Well, I thought it was cool of the dogs ideas of what humans do and how they made friends with the other pups and explored.

Cover: 10/10
Summary: 10/10
Beginning: 5/10
Story: 9/10

Overall: 9 1/2 - 10

Great job. Your book was great and I would enjoy reviewing more of your stories. I hoped this helped you. Have a great day and keep on writing.

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