Hi
This is the first time I have written suspense, and I need your help, please.
Does it need to be in three parts?
Is it suspenseful, and if not, how can I increase the feeling without increasing the word count?
Does it make sense- can you understand the story plot?
Is it too complicated? - this is a fault of mine, I try to pack too much in.
The title- should it be The Girl with Patricia's face? An empty cot? Blame?
Thank you for your time and comments.
I've had some beta reader feedback and adjusted the story. Please do read and comment.
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The girl with her face
Mystery / ThrillerPatricia is a recovering alcoholic who returns to the town where she had been a wife , and briefly, a mother. She is trying to recover lost memories around the trauma of losing her child, but instead sees a girl with her face. Strong emotions le...
