HUMSAFAR
The amazing story humsafar is written by MANANLOVE05
Regarding your summary, there is no description of your story, being manan fan some will read but not many so please give some description
Ur concept is good and interesting. I would love to read your book to know what happens and why manik behaves like that.
About ur writing.
Ur writing is good, avoid grammatical mistakes and always try to improve your writing to best.
I would love to rate ur book 7.5 of 10
All the best for your future dear...
Reviewed by CathrineRajkumar