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Ask the Creepypastas~Written by CreepypastaFan330~

This was written by CreepypastaFan330.All credit goes to him/her.This is constructive criticism,no offence meant to CP330
Me:Say hi people!
Jeff The Killer: *Waves*
BEN Drowned: *Too busy playing video games*
(Okay,here we are right off the bat.I mean no harm,but I think he would be hacking a video game,or inside one,not playing one.OK,continue)
Slender Man:Hello child
(No offence but it's Slenderman not Slender Man.Or Slender,Slendie,Slendy,Slendad,or Slenderp)
Eyeless Jack: *Asleep on the couch holding a kidney*
The Rake: *Looks at you*
(Uh,OK,isn't the Rake feral?He wouldn't be looking at you,he'd be eating your insides)
Laughing Jack:Hello!
KageKao:Kekeke~Hi!

(Doesn't KageKao only speak Japanese?)
Heartful Lou:Hello.*Waves*
Homicidal Liu: Hi.
(Isn't he,like,dead?And if he survived,he would have a grudge and would be trying to kill Jeff.And....what happened to Sully?)
Lost Silver: H-hi.
Hoodie:*Waves*
Masky: Hi!
Splendorman:Hi!!!!!!!!!!!!
Trendorman: Hello! Would you like me to make you a new outfit? I have plenty of fabric to choose from-
Me:No Trendorman, not now.
Trendorman:*Sighs* ok.
Offenderman:Well hello. *Holds rose up to you*
(Why would they let Offenderman in their home in the first place?)
Me: *Pushes Offenderman out of the room*
Glitchy Red: *Watches the door slam shut then looks at you*Hi.
(Why was he watching the door in the first place?Is that his fetish?)
Smile Dog:Arf!*Translation:Nice to meet you!*
Jeff The Killer:*Kneels down to pet Smile*
(Why are you still calling him Jeff The Killer?Just call him Jeff XD)
Carmen Riverwood/Faceless(My OC): *Waves his hand holding his large knife,notices,puts that hand down and waves with his other hand* Hi.
Ticci Toby:*Trips down the stares and glares at Kagekao who had his hand on the star he tripped on*
Kagekao:*Laughs and helps Toby up*
(OK,two things.First off,even if it was unintentional,ERMAHGERD TOBY X KAGEKAO 4 LIF!!!2,what's up with Kagekao?Earlier,you wrote it as KageKao.Now,you write it as Kagekao.I'm not being picky,I'm just observing.)
Pinkamina: Hehehe! Hi!
(Screams)
Me:*Whispers to you*Pikamina is really scary to me,I'll show you why,watch if you dare
https://youtu.be/5ls_x14_Pbg
https://youtu.be/utrAEkWmFZc
(The links don't work in the story)
Me:The music is so happy! But the animation is gory and scary. It makes me sick.
(Same bro same she freaky.And where's Sally?)
Pinkamina:Hey!
Me:Sorry
Everyone:*Just ignores me and Pinkamina*
Sonic.EXE:I AM GOD!*looks at you*Oh hi,when did you get here?
(Ok....so you wrote him saying I am god,not knowing the reader was there?If I'm correct,you meant to write it as something he does in his spare time,saying I am God.But I don't think he'd say it to thin air,and you don't have it say he's talking to anyone....just saying)
Me: XD
Tails Doll:Hi.
Jane The Killer:Hello.
(OK,Jeff killed Jane right?So if they were in the same room,which they are,she'd be trying to kill him,not saying hello)
Zalgo:*Breaks through the wall*MWAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!
Me:Get out Zalgo,you're not supposed to be here!
Zalgo:*Leaves through the hole he made*
Me:Those are the Pastas for now, ask away!
(Alright.Overall,it was good.That story belonged to chapter 1 of Ask The Creepypastas by CreepypastaFan330.Go check them out)