Chapter Four

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Narrator: Let me share you fokes were we left of. So Jane has just gotten kidnapped by a group of henchmen who Rafeal thinks its Petra but we will find out who it is in this part.

Xo: Rafeal I heard what happend are you ok

(Rafeal drinking his feelings away locked up in his penthouse)

Rafeal: Ok do you think I look ok my girlfriend just got kidnapped and in 48

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Rafeal: Ok do you think I look ok my girlfriend just got kidnapped and in 48. 47hr she could possible die and its all my fault

Xo: Its not your fault Raf

(Rafeal yelling at Xo)

Rafeal: YES IT IS WHENEVER I FALL IN LOVE SOMETHING BAD ALWAYS HAVE TO HAPPEN!

HOW AREN'T YOU SCARED!

(Rafeal started to cry again)

Xo: I am. I'm terrified I wonder if I could do something differently I would

Rafeal: How could somebody be this cruel,troture a pregnant woman

Xo: Some people are just surrounded by negative people then do negative things

Abuela: has encontrado a Jane (Have you found Jane)

Xo: No but Micheal has been up all night looking for answers trying to trace the call

Rafeal: Micheal Micheal Micheal Micheal if I hear his name one more time I'm gonna blow my mind

Xo: What have you done hmmm

Rafeal: I was actually on the phone to naideen and she said that change had put clues in the sentence which said the longitude and latitude of the IP of were she is.

Xo: Omgosh Rafeal i didn't know Im so sorry

Rafeal: The cops are going to be at the IP of the henchmen. We also found there number plat of the kidnappers which told us that the van was stolen

Xo: This seems too easy

Rafeal: I know thats why I have $800,000 one me just in cause the plan don't work

Abuela: Has peleado de todo, sí (you've fought of it all yes)

Xo: Why are you upset you have made an amazing plan

Rafeal: I know but what happend if it didn't work. What happen if jane died. I would have to leave with that and I can't do that I just can't

(Micheal burst in the room and shouts)

Micheal: We've found Jane

Narrator: I wonder whats gonna happen in the next part will see if Jane is going to be brought back safely will see in the next time...



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