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philosophique's review for snowvirgin

philosophique's review for snowvirgin

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PROS

- I love the composition: the model, the swirls of light and petals, and mostly, the parallel image/reflection by the water. 

CONS

- The text is just... so different. It doesn't fit the entire edit at all. Even the watermark text.

- The reflection is a little too gritty, and when I look closely it's pixelated.

- The part that divides the upright part and the reflection doesn't seem to blend in together so it creates this awkward continuation. 

OVERALL

Has promise, honestly. Just make better font choices and colors and styles, plus make sure the elements do blend well.

RATING

7/10 Not bad. Keep practicing :) 

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⏰ Last updated: Oct 28, 2017 ⏰

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