EVERYTHING WRONG WITH THE MOONDAWN SERIES

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by Howlova

by Howlova

Oh nvm, there isn't a list because EVERY SINGLE CONCEPT OF THIS CRINGY SERIES IS TERRIBLE. Let me list the crap first.

Well, the start of the story is total crap
She literally meets Bane and how she met him OH HOW CLICHE! OMG HE KIDNAPS HER FROM AN ALLEYWAY WHAT A COINCIDENCE!

At first, the story was explaining that love doesn't last forever. Honestly, when I wrote that cancerous story, I wanted to make Bane and Moondawn to have a master and puppy romantic relationship. WHICH DID NOT TURN OUT WELL. Well, I made one x reader of that on my second account -Bloodskull- but it was a yandere x reader. But it was more like a puppet master thing. It was a Sasori x Reader... I confess...

I did make a guardian protective type of relationship, which worked well in my Kakashi x Reader. And I'm starting another one... But idk for that one.

But I might make a puppy and master x reader thing one day that isn't cringy. The question is:

Who would be suited for that?

Anyways moving on to the huge flaws of my cancerous story.

I just added crap to fill the blanks. And I was like OMG she wants power now. And she gets a spike collar wow!

She needs to kill Gleam. And wow she lost and lost again once more. And Bane wanted to sleep next to her WOAH!

And there's some endings. Where they almost had a lemon, or Moondawn kills bane saying that she was pretending to love him, you know drama. And she kills gleam too.

Wait! Let me explain the three endings!

The first, she kills gleam and makes love with bane

The second, she doesn't kill Gleam and has a happy ending with bane

Kills gleam and bane both and laughs sadistically

Yeah. It's terrible.

Thanks for reading for my crap.

Might make a a cringy story purposely for fun idk.

Bye, sorry if I wasted your time.