cover: 7/10
it's just not my favorite cover of yours, sorrybio: 8/10
gives a good synopsis of the story but doesn't quite draw me in as much as i would likewriting: 20/20
the way you write is absolutely beautiful !! you're very very talented and you give so much description! your characters are so well written.overall: 19/20
i think the way you write could make anyone enjoy a story! your writing is beautiful but my only note is try to draw in your readers more! cause after they're pulled in, you've got them hooked. also, there isn't many notes on the story so far, since there's so few chapters.FINAL SCORE: 54/60
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I PASSED ALONG THE WAY
WELL, I GOT DOWN ON MY KNEES
AND I PRETENDED TO PRAY!"
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