WeAllNeedHeroes Reads: Starkit's Prophecy

Chapter 2 the Rise of a Heroin

Are you sure you want the rise of drugs among the clans?

ok jazzie-kun pleas dont get mad at me cause your not in it yet. You'l apear soon dont worry.

Oh, so Jazzpaw is based on her friend. Still doesn't make sense.

StarKit wock up and sunlit was in the branches. She closed her eyes againstill tired. Butter mom wouldn’t let her sleep not today.

Oh StarClan, the branches have captured the sun! And her mom is made of butter? I could've sworn she was bright blue-gray!

“Sweety its time to get up” said Dawnsparkle; her eys shinning. “Today is important today.”

Ah, yes, her gargantuan blue eyes which would be extremely creepy.

“What is it Mom” said StarKit awake right away. Then the she cat rememembered what today was.

She is six moons old. Unless she has short-term memory, she should know this.

“Ohmigosh its my serimony today!’ she squelled excercisedly. Today was the day she was an apprentice!

Spelling is overrated.

She flicked outside not even waiting for her Mom. But her Mom cot up to her quick.

"Flicked" is not a term used for running. Unless somehow she teleported... You know what, I wouldn't be surprised.

"Sweety you know the clans don’t except cat slike use sometimes.” She said.

Of course, you're purple, you are the kit of half-clan and medicine cat love!

StarKit glared. She didn’t lake beig told that. Just because her Mom was a usedto be Shadowclan cat and her dad was jayFeather the medicine Cat didn"t mean she ws different!

See my prior comment.

“StarPaw come here.” Said FireStar from the leg. He jumped down.

A LEG IN THE CAMP. WHAT IN STARCLAN? Oh ya, she's not an apprentice yet.

“StarKit it s tome for you to become an apentice: he said. "Your a strong brave cat and because of that I will mentor with you.”

So many bloody things wrong with that.

Ever body gasped. StarKit did too. Se herd hear mother say “Wow!”.

She's now Starpaw.

Firehert liked her shoulder. He whispered in her ear “youll be the best their ever was StarPaw I know ti.”

I can imagine her shoulder is very nice.

Surpised she walked away when they were done howling for her./ Then she went ofer to JayFeathern and DawnSparkle who were very prod.

The cats are not dogs. Howling is for dogs.

“Daughetr where very happy but he have to say something said Jayfeather his chest puffed ouit. "You see there is this prophcy Starcaln gave me it said that out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly.”

StarPaw gasped. What does it mean?

I have no idea!

lol I update fast dont i. REVEIW or ill hit over the head with a frying pan! XDD jk

I'm not so sure about that.