Okay, so it's been like what, a year since I wrapped up this story?
I've come to realise that this story is so unsatisfactory and shitty and horribly written. It doesn't do justice to the first book and it's just a mess in general.
I want to fix it. I think that this book really missed the mark in a lot of regards. It doesn't have much substance, there are some problems with time and the flow of the story. It's very flawed and the ending is so rushed and sudden.
It's disappointing.
Terribly, terribly disappointing.
So, I want to fix it. I feel horrible about the way this story turned out and I feel like you all deserve something better than this. I want to change up the story a bit. I want to include more domestic things because, honestly, this story is so flat and boring.
Please tell me if you agree. I really want to make this a good story and you all deserve better than a measly 11 eleven chapters filled with crappy, mundane plot and lots of holes.
Would you like to see new, better content for this story? Or are you all really satisfied with this half-assed barely-entertaining story? Any comment and criticism is welcome.
-Rosa
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