Here the first page (should I keep the inferior part or should I just make it perfect, what ever flows better I'll do) read from right to left, manga style
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I also picked the name, I picked Children of Judas. Just based on the time period I am writing in, it works. It opens in 1866, around the Jack the Ripper cases in London. It also makes sense with Illami's family origins. Her family fled to England from Bulgaria after the vampire trials. They changed their Bulgarian last name to Daniels and developed a watch and clock industry that is doing pretty well. Hannya refers more to demons anyways and not specifically vampires like the Children of Judas did. Also I decided on the title page
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On each cover it will be one of the characters as a doll. You'll understand the doll thing more when Molly comes in to the story in the second arc.
