Avneil ff: Fanaah(completed)

chapter 11

Neil gets a call from shweta

Neil:hello mom

Shweta:ha tillu...sun aaj raat ko na prakash ji ke business partner ke ghar pe hume dinner ke liye jaana hai...toh tu saare kaam vaam chodkar dinner par aa jaana...

Neil:lekin mom

Shweta:kuch lekin vekin nahi...tu aa raha hai matlab aa raha hai...main kuch sunne nahi vaali....main tujhe address msg kar dungi...

Saying this she hang the call...neil sighs and then looks at the direction from where avni left...

Neil:pata nahi avni itni udaas kyun rehti hai...ek kaam karta hu...uske friends se directly puch lunga...

On other side

At khanna mansion

Bebe:ohh madona...agar voh kaam main busy tha toh use force kyun kiya...

Shweta:bebe...aap jaanti nahi hai..maine suna hai ki hum jinke ghar dinner pe jaa rahe hai...unki ek beti bhi hai...voh bhi tillu ki age ki hai..aur maine toh yeh bhi suna hai ki voh kafi sundar bhi hai...toh hum yeh chance kyun chod de...isliye maine tillu ko vaha pe bula liye...dono milenge...baatein karenge...acche se ghul mil jayenge toh phir hum shaadi ki baat kar sakte hai...kyunki neil toh khud shaadi ki baat karne se raha...

Bebe:lekin neil ne kaha tha na ki voh inn arrange marriages main believe nahi karta toh tu kyun use force kar rahi hai...

Shweta:bebe...main kaha use abhi shaadi ke mandap main bitha rahi hu...pehle theek se dono ko milaungi...phir agar sab theek raha toh hi baat aage badhaungi na...

Bebe:tujhse toh baat karna hi bekar hai..

Shweta pouts...

On otherhand

Avni was lifelessly walking on road....it was raining heavily and she was fully drenched....her body was shivering due to cold but she was only remembering the incident which happened few minutes ago....

Avni:nahi...voh mera neil kaise ho sakta hai...agar voh neil hota toh voh mujhe toh pehchaan hi leta na....phir kyun main uski taraf khichi jaa rahi hu....nahi...yeh galat hai....main sirf aur sirf apne neil ki hu...sirf usse pyaar karti hu.....

(Song in bold letters-darmiyaan)

AAKHON MAIN TERE SAAYE
CHAHE TOH HONA PAYE
YAADON SE TERI FAASLAN
HAAAYEEE....

JAKE BHI TU NA JAYE
THEHRA TU DIL MAIN HAYE
HASRAT SA BANKE KYUN BHALA

KYUN YAAD KARTI HU
MITTHTI HU BANTI HU
MUJHKO TU LAYA YE KAHA

BENAAM RISHTA VOH
BECHAIN KARTA JO
HONA SAKE VOH BAYAAN DARMIYAAN.....

DARMIYAAN DARMIYAAN
DARMIYAAN DARMIYAAN
KUCH TOH HAI TERE MERE DARMIYAAN
HAYEE....

DARMIYAAN DARMIYAAN
DARMIYAAN DARMIYAAN
KUCH TOH HAI TERE MERE DARMIYAAN

KUCH TOH HAI TERE MERE DARMIYAAN.......

"I love u avni...i really do...i just can't describe my love for u...i love to spend time with u....u make me happier that i ever thought i could be...and if u let me..i will spend the rest of my life trying to make u feel the same way...so miss avni mehta...would u like to spend ur entire life with me...will u marry me"

She remembered his confession....

"Will u marry me"

"I love u avni"

"I will never leave u...i promise avni"

"Would u like to spend ur entire life with me"

"I love u avni...i really do"

This words were ringing continuously in her ears....

All world was blank for her ....

And the one who was present for her in her world was she and her neil

She stumbles because of rock and falls down...

Her knee gets injured due to this but she is not in her senses to feel any pain...

She is just sitting at middle of road staring at nothingness....

The rain was very heavy because of which there were not many people present there and the one who were present was least interested to see her...

Avni remembers neil saying

"Agar gir bhi gayi toh uth toh sakti ho na...aur main hu na tumhare saath...kabhi tumhe girne nahi dunga"

She smiles sadly

Avni:tum nahi ho neil...isliye dekho..main gir gayi...aur mujhe uthane vaala bhi koi nahi hai...mujhe tumhare paas aana hai neil...plz mujhe apne saath lekar jao.......

Neil who was passing by that road saw avni who was lifelessly sitting on road fully drenched because of rain...

He was shocked seeing her like this...

Neil(worried):avni...

He quickly get down from his car and ran towards her...

He kneels beside her and cups her face

Neil:avni...avni tum yaha...aise beech sadak par kyun bethi ho...

Avni looks at neil

Avni:neil...

Neil:haa...main neil..

Avni:nahi...tum mere neil nahi ho...voh toh mujhe chodke ke chala gaya humesha humesha ke liye...tum mere neil nahi ho....mujhe mere neil ke paas jaana hai...neil.....

Neil was confused hearing her words...

Neil(in mind):yeh avni kis neil ki baat kar rahi hai...pehle ise ghar leke jaana hoga...lekin iske ghar ka address toh mujhe pata hi nahi hai...kya karu....

Avni:neil...mujhe mera neil chahiye...neil

She faints in neil's arms...

Neil(shouts):avni....avni utho...

He picks her up in bridal style and also takes her bag...he makes her sit in his car...

Neil(in mind):kya karu...shayad avni ke bag main kuch mil sakta hai...

He checks her bag and founds her id card

Neil:Avni ashish mehta

He also found the address of her house in that

Neil:mehta mansion...yeh toh vahi address hai jaha abhi mujhe dinner ke liye jaana tha...matlab ki ashish mehta papa ke business partner hai...

He droves towards mehta mansion....

Here is next chappy...so what will be family's reaction seeing avneil together...will neil get to know about avni's past...will avni get to know that her neil is alive....stay tune...

Love Mamta