Mephadow Learned To Love Revision

Not A Part Just A Suggestion

I've recently started to think about my writing skill. Yes I've improved but, I'm basically only telling the story. I want to show more of the story and the plot line seems a little boring. Since tomorrow is Friday the thirteenth I wanted to put a spooky twist. I want to end things with this book and tweak it a bit to be more interesting. So there will be one more final revision to the series.

Mephadow Learn to Love Final Revision

Mephiles is a vampire, Shadow is in Sonic's clique along with Rouge, Silver is a teen fan, Eggman is still hidden but spies on Shadow, and I'm just not going to involve Black Doom.

I will be recycling parts from this story to make it better. I will keep it up until October 1st. You have eighteen days. I will be starting the first chapter now and hope to not make it seemed rushed. If you have any questions about this story feel free to ask. Also I won't do something like chapter 44 again. It was supposed to be Eggman's robot spying on him and Eggman releasing a stress hormone in Shadow's stomach to trigger a massive poop he was holding.

Shadow would poop his pants and Mephiles would help him out by bringing Shadow back to his house and telling him he would distract Silver until he was ready to come back to the party. Shadow would then realize that Mephiles saw all his "freakness" and didn't care, he still loved him. That makes Shadow realize he wants to give him a second chance but with changes to the relationship.

Mephiles distracts Silver and talks with him. Mephiles is completely oblivious to the fact that Silver is flirting and planning their future wedding and Silver falls in love. Later he will fire Shadow out of spite for dating Mephiles because Mephiles clearly loves him but chose Shadow.

Mephiles makes Shadow crocheted blanket for the summer time and they both live pretty good until the bafguys come out.

So that's how that will go in summary just with a bit of drama that I didn't mention. If you have any questions about the series, you can ask. Just don't ask about the sleep thing because I will go over it in the next book.