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HEYYY!!!
THE RESULTS ARE HERE!!!🎊🎊🎊
EVERYONE DID REALLY WELL!!!

BUT THE FIRST THREE WHICH THE JUDGE LOVED THE MOST ARE..

THIRD PLACE GOES TO!!!

WE WERE THERE BY AliasScarlet

WITH A TOTAL OF 76 MARKS!!🎉

REVIEW BY THE JUDGE:- It’s interesting and if it actually had a good writing style, I’d be hooked. The writing style could be better. It would have gotten more impact if it was.It’s different but not the most unique. The story is also pretty good and does catch my interest.A little rookie mistakes but there’s not a lot.
Chatachters:- Even when I have yet to know of their names, I was already interested in them. They were that well-written.
Cover title:- Why is the author’s name different in the cover? I mean… why didn’t they change it?

Honestly, the title is very unoriginal and I’ve heard of a book that exactly has the same title (it’s a manga, though).

Honestly, the title is very unoriginal and I’ve heard of a book that exactly has the same title (it’s a manga, though)

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SECOND PLACE GOES TO...!

LETS DO SOME BAKING TODAY!
By

TrushaJi

WITH A TOTAL OF 80/100🎉🎉

REVIEW:- It’s funny, it’s more or less original, and it’s pretty good. I definitely did like the humor that was very well done; the writing isn’t the best but the storyline makes up for it

There are grammar errors like incorrect use of punctuation, incorrect capitalisation,spelling errors.

Cover:-Honestly, the title sounds like something from a cookbook. At first, I was confused but okay, at least it’s unique. The cover is simple… but it could be better
Character:-It’s really good; they had character, personalities that made them who they are, humor, and they’re very well written in a way that I would actually love them

It’s great. Keep doing what you’re doing you’re doing a great job.

It definitely did its job as a comedy book. It may have not exceeded my expectations but it didn’t let me down.

 It may have not exceeded my expectations but it didn’t let me down

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AND THE WINNER OF THE GENERAL FICTION SECTION, THE FIRST-PLACE GOES TO....

100% MATCH BY StellaMaria77

WITH A TOTAL OF ...82 MARKS!🎉

REVIEW:- The idea is pretty creative but so far, I think this would be so much better if it were a tragedy, rather than a happy go lucky love story (I have yet to read it but that’s just the vibe that it gives me). Okay, turns out, I like it
Storyline:-It’s good, not unique but it’s very well-written in a way that you could call it yours. Even if the story is not unique, the way that it’s delivered is something you can be proud of

It’s obvious that I didn’t have a good first impression of your book but that just means that there’s more than the title and the cover. I actually saved this in my library so that I can take my time on finishing it. 

You should improve the title, cover, and the synopsis because it would give much more impact and gain more of the reader’s want to read it.


CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL! 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

THANK YOU TO THE JUDGE🎉🎉:-
ItsJustIrina

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