Dedicated to WillaWindrow
Plot: The plot is very simple which is very good in certain stories like yours. I love how well you have incorporated every characters thoughts and point of views. It takes a great deal of penmanship to present such a vast variety of thoughts and images and opinions in such a good way.
Rating: ☆☆☆☆☆
Theme: The theme is not complicated at first but rather understandable; I do suggest you add some plot twists in this story and I have a feeling that there is going to be some sort of omnious plot twist which I am excited about. The summary is a well written, not too much give away, and I like the title of your story too.
Ratings: ☆☆☆☆
Grammar/Punctuation: The grammar and punctuations are really good and flawless. Keep it up
Ratings: ☆☆☆☆
Characterization: The characters are so well planned and painted that it is almost real. I love the relationship the various charaters have with each other. I also love their imperfections and flaws and how vulnerable they are at the same time, that vulnerability is a really great add to a story and a character that grabs a readers attention almost immediately because of it relatibility and the personal feeling that it adds to the story.
Ratings: ☆☆☆☆
Overall view: The narrative is good but it could be better, I also feel a certain person touch missing, and by personal touch I mean your unique narrative style something that makes this story your own. I want you to write your stories not the way others will like to read it but the way you will; your individuality is missing in the narrative of the story. I feel nothing special when I read it like yes this is written by Willa this is her style. I understand that adding your personal effect is hard when you are writing the story in various perspective of the characters but I believe it is achievable you just have to experiment and figure out what appeals to you. Don't go for what will be appealing to a reader surely you can take someone else's advice by asking them to read your various stories but beyond that you have to figure it out yourself; your own versatility in the way you present the story. If you can work on that I am sure it will be a great story. It is really simple and down-to-earth but I am also waiting for that wow factor in your narrative that will just blow my mind. This is definitely a book I will recommend readers to give a go, cause it's great and I will read it till the very end.
Rating: ☆☆☆☆☆
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