the weeping spirit

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She is the spirit that lives  in the deep thriller water. Once on a cold night with the deep blue sea matching the water with the full moon shining the brightest it ever would. Two brothers Alex  and Mark were playing soccer near a lake as they were playing the ball fell in the navy blue lake. Mark went in to the lake to get the ball as he pick up the ball a horrific woman with red eyes , black opened hair, black peeled skin, and she wore a wore out  dress it was awfully ripped. She creeped behind Mark.  Alex was frozen he pointed to the woman and said " l-l-look b-b-behind ". Before Mark could look behind she pulled him in the water in a glampes.
Alex was so scared of what he had saw. He ran as fast as he could and told his parents everything his parents. His parents and some other villagers looked for mark all night but could find him. His parents moved to UK. It has past 10 years till that instant. Alex can still remember the horrific face he saw. Alex wonders who  she was and why she took Mark let's go a bit to the past...

Please tell me about the things I should do next time comment please if I get 5-10 comments I do part two. 😀 I won't feel bad.

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⏰ Last updated: Jun 28, 2020 ⏰

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