how would you guys like a remake of this story with better writing and an actual storyline that isn't all over the place?
i would write it like this:
you walked back to your dorm room...
and i'll probably have a couple of OC's too :)
mistakes i made in the book:
- your birthday was the same as jane's but not ben's which is totally wrong since ben was your twin
- i just generally hate it lol
- also the two OC's i made, micheala and sadie, were my ibfs but then we fell out and started bitching about me and sided with my ex gf who told me to k*ll myself so they won't be in this story obviously
- i'm also going to remove alice and daisy from this story only because idk how i would write them in
that's it! would you guys like to see it?
YOU ARE READING
Love Lessons (Carlos De Vil X Reader)
RomanceYou are (y/n) beast, daughter of King Adam and Queen Belle, twin sister of Prince Ben. You and your brother invited four vks over to Auradon Prep. What will happen when they try and steal the wand? Will they choose good? Will good overcome evil?
