This story was wrote way back in 2016 so it has too many errors and has a weak plot. But Good news! I decided to rewrite this story, this 2020 and changed about 50% of it, but the idea and characters still remained :)
Less errors, fixed the plot, grammar and typos, plus I can say that the story is not "jeje" and cringey anymore.
NO MORE:
-"Sino ba talaga ako?"
-ANNOYING SOMEONE'S POV! WITH THE "HAHAHA! HUMANDA NA KAYO" (Korina S ka gorl?)
-Irritating long spaces na akala mo ay highway lmao!
-Mga tangang side characters! (Good news! Matalino na sila ngayon!)
-Exposure of the non sense side characters that has no connection with the plot lol
MORE!:
-Romance
-Soul and Heart
-Plot twists!
-Ideas!
-Focused on the protagonists
-Mysteries
-Emotions
-Thrill
-Sense
-Humor
At madami pa pong aabangan! Since rewritten po siya ^^ Hindi ko po totally binago ang idea pero nirewrite ko siya into a better version at nagdagdag ng scenes na mas may sense po kesa sa 2016 version hehe.
Unlike 4 years ago, I gained lots of experience in writing so I really hope you could check out the new version in Dreame app or website! ^^
Tittle: Janine: The Lost Gangster Queen
Author: peculiarlullaby
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New scenes, improved plot, new ideas, I did put more soul and heart in the new version of it so it will be really appreciated.
