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I was Fine until You [UNDER MAJOR EDITING]
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  • Parts 14
  • Time 56m
Ongoing, First published Aug 09, 2014
“            I was fine until you, but my love I don't regret it and I never ever will, you are a part of me and always will be... "         Anisha  Hameed.                                               (Based on a true story)


His bright  brown eyes brimmed to tears. He shook his head.

I felt my heart shatter into a  billion pieces.

I just knew he didn't love me back. I turned back, refusing  to show how much I cared for him.
He was my everything in those  moments. I felt hot tears prickle  down my pale face.

 Now I knew what was love and what was heartbreak.

It felt like I was being hit in the heart a thousand times.
My love for him is eternal .
I still remember the  very first day I saw him, his amazing eyes met mine, I was crazed to see  his eyes were full of hurt, pain and sadness. He was in a huge amount of pain. I was determined to help him take that pain away. And in the whole process I've fallen for him. 


He mouthed three words that graved in to my heart forever.Three words, said so many  times a day.
I nodded and answered: 'I love you more'.He softly shook his head.
''I love you more than anything in this world, You're truly beautiful, perfect to me, in every damn way., Your amazing, I always wished for a miracle and your my miracle. I love you Anisha Hameed,I love you''





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