Fitoor
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  • Reads 2,815
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  • Parts 3
  • Time 45m
Ongoing, First published Jan 01, 2022
~Asad X Adah~

❝ you smiled, i fell in love ❞

~~

He was irritated. For the way, she chided him everytime. But what frustrated him more was the way she attracted him in every single way. He was frustrated that she is so beautiful, inside out that he irritated her for no reason but just to hear her dramatic voice which was sweet as fück--

A mongoose, A monkey, A cunning wolf, An annoying person he was, in her eyes. A hot n' handsome human species too. But nahh!!! She ain't saying that. But nonetheless he is a good person and she knows.

But this stays the way it is until he had finally had it.

~~

"Jab bhi aankhein kholta hun na" his eyes held a passion. A strong one.

"toh tumhari yeh hassi, yeh smile, yeh badi badi khubsurat si aankhein, yeh gusse se laal chehra.. sab kuch saamne aa jata hai !!!!!! SAB KUCH!!" 

He frustratingly confessed staring straight in my eyes. His face sweaty, jaw ticking and teeth grinding made me pin myself more against the wall. I stared him back with utter shock. 

~~

An Indian Muslim Story!

• Language: Hinglish (Hindi + English)
• Mature Content: Can't say, would inform if included.

I promise to not disappoint anyone of you. I have always felt this as a beautiful story with littles ignites in it. I would be glad if you give "Fitoor" a chance. 

Thank you! 🌎💎

Highest Rankings:
#1 in Adah
#1 in HaniaAmir
#4 in DualPov
#49 in hotboys
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35 parts Complete Mature

© All Copyright reserved to the writer, @PoohBear8435 only. Please do not copy, distribute or publish any of my work in any form. .... ... She sat looking at the big mirror blushing and thinking about her groom, she didn't even know his name. She eagerly waited for him to come and take her with him to his home, to their home. She was thinking what he would say, what his voice sounded like, what he would call her and how would she react to his actions. The things which she had never imagined in her life about marriage, home, romance, relationship etc., she was thinking about it all today. She hears the door open and she closes her eyes, her head bowed down, cheeks blushed while her chest heaved up and down due to heavy breathing. She hears a voice talking to her from a bit far. She had her back to him. "Hi, Thanks a lot. If you hadn't come, then I would have been on the streets. You really did a good job. The director was impressed with your improvisation though the role was small." She was confused, what is her groom speaking about. She opens her eyes and turns around to see him. Her face falls, it was not her husband. He hands an envelope to her and thanks her before he leaves. She takes the envelope still confused. She thinks - Oh! This must be a wedding gift from his friend. But what was he speaking about, I couldn't understand anything ... Marriage was not on her list but when it happened, it happened in a strange way. Read the book to understand how is this a strange marriage and how would this ever work. *Fictional story Was listed at #1 under SidNaaz on 21st Jan, 2021.. happiest day!! Started:. 21/12/2020 Completed:. 12/03/2021