I'm working on a story that I hope to later publish. This was the first attempt at writing the story and I would say that I can do a lot better. I thought maybe I could release it to the public and see if you can give me any suggestions on the plot of the story. There will be a huge difference from this one and the final draft (I also have no clue on how to use comas. Help!) Angel is a 12 year old girl that had to learn how to survive while running from the police. Just when she thought that life could only get worse her life changed for the better. Now with the power of a dragon, she is able to help the people she hurt. But who did this to her, and why her? Watch as she lives he life as a soon-to-be superhero.