// [!] spoilers for quintessentual quintuplets (gotoubun no hanayome) [!]
just my opinion
is it me or does the confession from fuutarou the latest chapters (saw it thru clips) feels out of place - and let's assume that there is a stellar build-up leading up to the confession - the timing of it doesn't seem paced appropriately.
for me, i'm not saying yotsuba didn't deserve to be the bride - in spite of the lack of screentime/development - but i believe three aspects that could be changed or implemented; a) more screentime/romantic development for yotsuba, b) a satisfying resolution to her inner problem/conflict, and c) the confession happening *after* the graduation.
of course, these aren't perfect changes, but i think that it can make yotsuba's character more interesting, make fuutarou's decision more sound, and make yotsuba undergo a satisfying character arc that she has to personally overcome instead of it being overshadowed simply because of the confession itself.
/if you've read until the end, then thanks for that! <3
// just a random question-
are there any other writing apps (preferably mobile) wherein i can post my works?? though i don't plan on leaving this app, i'm fully aware that this writing app is almost barren and although i primarily write for fun, it's just sometimes demoralizing when you know that your creative works won't gain a significant recognition due to the lack of active users recently
ofc, that doesn't mean i'll delete my works here and transfer them to the other apps, but it'll most likely give me more motivation to write a lot more and i could post chapters on here and the other writing app
thx for the acknowledgement <3