-fading

i feel myself dissolving into nothing 

satinsomnia

darling, that's a side effect of life
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WalkingPerson

first "story" i ever wrote, i'll probably write more as i try to kinda see the bigger picture and maybe help others figure it out too.
          
          Since this is my first ever time writing and publishing something on here, i'd really appreciate anyone's criticism and advice,
          thank you in advance!
          
          P.S.
          english isn't my first language, so i'd really appreciate if you pointed out any mistakes in my writing and gave me advice on how to write better in english, thanks!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/348595670?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=WonderingComet&wp_originator=mzfW01wCk%2FuJ30PxHrrLCUsoc8WIzb7xFxjYOPi%2FIin8mg4d7Um3njJ9mXB%2BQ7l4kuh52wAmyHv%2FTwgGfRkG7CbiOc7AHbHkg6u0ky3HuwhMLyVlZ3bxVGy6IDuWcfwx

mackairoons

I love your poetry! Nostalgia and melancholy hit me so hard reading these. I know you are probably off with life now, working for your future but I just want to say good luck on everything! Hope you can find love during these dark days. I hope one day my writings can be beautiful and deep as yours! And I want to thank you for the support in your poetry. I'm going through an existential crisis and reading this helps me so much.  :)

Aenigmae12