70EricaLanger

New chapter available in The Max Effect 3.

70EricaLanger

If you have already read Mayday! May day! Look for the added Marvel-type spoiler.

nickolaihel

@70EricaLanger Ha ... doesn't have to happen by tomorrow obviously.  But something to think about as your spinsoff/side stories seem to all intertwine now.
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70EricaLanger

@nickolaihel crumbs I'll need to to employ a team of writers soon!
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nickolaihel

@70EricaLanger DEFINITELY need some stories to expand on how she took over whatever corrupt organization she did.  Sooo much can be done on there.
            
            Did she start out as a thug/heavy in order to get familiar with the organization and then decided she wanted to take over and had an unscheduled not so nice "chat" with the Boss(es) and their lieutenants/soldiers showcasing once again her unbelievable talents leaving them in NO DOUBT who was now in charge?
            
            Or did smash in to a crime boss' HQ, completely unannounced and unknown to anyone and just take over?  The latter is more Jen's speed, but not so easy to accomplish as she would likely have to destroy much of the organizations personal and assets before she got her message across.  That would destroy a lot of value and reduce the effectiveness of her newly acquired business.  
            
            Nevertheless, MUCH opportunity for FoS - superhuman strength, speed and invulnerability.  In fact she seems to be progressing beyond merely superhuman into the straight up "super" category.   No laser vision, x-ray vision, flight or other "powers" pls.
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