your story was insightful, gorgeous, beautiful. a true work of art. in fact, i read it to my dog and he has been following me around ever since just to hear more of your stunning way with words. he even regrew his tail (he’s a rescue dog i don’t cut dogs tails off for fun i swear) and began talking to me. he said to me ‘adam’. i think that shows the sheer power of your talent and your ability to really drive home your message. i’m sure if adam were to read it, he would start crying due to the sheer beauty bestowed upon him. he may even consider having sex with himself due to how attractively you described him. the adjective choices and gorgeous structuring imply a deeper, underlying metaphor to the many layers within the man adam himself. in short, your story was nothing less than a masterpiece. a new classic to rival the likes of shakespeare.
