Aestics

Hey guys! I have absolutely no idea how to conclude my story "Singularity," so I was hoping you could give me some fanfiction ideas about Tensura that you think will turn out great. I think that thinking up the plot of a new fanfiction will help me have an idea about how to properly end an story.

Zackown

@ Aestics All i can think about is not so much different from your achetype story, The character was born in the Zenin Family and will be in the same situation as Toji with the heavenly restriction but in return the character have the Mystic eyes of death perception (From Tsukihime) as his power since his origin is closely related to rimuru void.
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Aestics

@Aestics yeah but what kind of plot do you want?
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Zackown

@ Aestics  jjk seems interesting
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Aestics

Hey guys! I have absolutely no idea how to conclude my story "Singularity," so I was hoping you could give me some fanfiction ideas about Tensura that you think will turn out great. I think that thinking up the plot of a new fanfiction will help me have an idea about how to properly end an story.

Zackown

@ Aestics All i can think about is not so much different from your achetype story, The character was born in the Zenin Family and will be in the same situation as Toji with the heavenly restriction but in return the character have the Mystic eyes of death perception (From Tsukihime) as his power since his origin is closely related to rimuru void.
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Aestics

@Aestics yeah but what kind of plot do you want?
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Zackown

@ Aestics  jjk seems interesting
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Guren-Lotus

Honest Review after reading Chapter 15 of  Tensura X Arifureta, 
          
          Yess It's good, the choice of words are Also Acceptable but I Personally preferred words that are easy to Understand and didn't need google to know the meaning.  
          
          Phasing was Also Good.
          
          Storyline kinda Just Arifureta with a Little changes it feels like the same narrative as the cannon with Rimuru added here and there.
          
          Rimuru's Personality was off and I mean off this doesn't feels like the Rimuru we use to know and love this feels like Rimuru is just an Op OC.
          
          Rimuru rejecting Shea to Join them and Kaori to join the group kinda Kill the Harem aspect of Arifureta.
          
          The Plot was being carried by the Word plays and I honestly didn't see much development that I like.
          
          Over all it's an Above avenger Fanfiction

HerRoyalReader

@Guren-Lotus late response but you know the change in rimurus personality was caused by what happened in an alternate timeline to the one we know, right?
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2DaWatcher2

Here's some tips from a fellow writer. I suggest you take a break from wattpad and quit all the fanfictions and start brand new on a SINGLE fanfiction so you don't tire yourself. I don't want nor does anybody want a precious gem to be thrown on the lake because you are running. I really like your fanfictions and feel bad for it to be dropped but if you don't want something else to drop irl. Be it personality or a person or a injury. If you truly like all the fanfictions then make sure to keep your health and real life the most important. Thanks.  And it's up to you to make.
          
          
          
          "WALK. Not run!" -The wise stranger who watches in the darkness.