Amil-CheriRevel

Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays, readers, writers, and fellow GT fans! Enjoy the festivities and I wish everyone a Happy New Year! 
          	ヽ(✿゚▽゚)ノ - ACR

okminer07

Hello, I don’t leave comments often but I feel like I must tell you that I see a lot of potential in your writing. You have avoided using cliche plots so far and have created stories that I want to read more of. The characters you create are quite good and you flesh them out very well, nothings to in your face which is a common mistake by authors that you have avoided. I really hope you continue to write ( especially that one story in your oneshots with Mia)

Amil-CheriRevel

@okminer07 Hi Sorry for the late response! As you can note, I'm not on as often and am a slow uploader! But thank you, thank you, thank you for this wonderful comment! And I really appreciate the feedback! I hope you can see some realism even if it's fiction! I'm working on more, and am trying to stick to a schedule but I don't see that happening anytime soon be on the lookout for updates as they come!! 
            Take care and happy holidays!!  o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ
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Amil-CheriRevel

Hello! So in a rare occurrence since I've started writing "How Little You Care", I've managed to post another chapter within a decent time frame (you can thank my cold for that). 
          I know this is just a hobby and all, but recently I went back and re-read what I've posted and come to the conclusion that I feel, is kinda 'boring'. I think I fell into the 'info dump' trap and added stuff where it didn't call for it.
          I have the next chapter about halfway done but will need a lot of editing before I post it - so stay tuned. 
          But what do you think? Is it paced too slowly? Are the characters just bland and boring? Is Rachel just pissing you off? (lol)
          But seriously, I welcome any feedback from my wonderful readers! You guy's comments give my story life!

Amil-CheriRevel

@AtomicJelly  OMG thank you for your interest!  But please take your time! As you can see, I hop on when I can and hopefully, it's to post this story or the current one I'm working on or read a chapter of all the wonderful GT stories I'm missing out. Lookin' forward to hearing your feedback, hon. 
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AtomicJelly

@Amil-CheriRevel I've just arrived, so I haven't started reading yet but I enjoy stories with decent information, not only g/t empty scenarios. I'll start reading it soon then I'll come back with more detailed feedback!
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Amil-CheriRevel

@Coffeh04 Dude thanks for the feedback!  This helps a ton and it puts a smile knowing that you enjoy it!! 
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Amil-CheriRevel

Ah, life why do you curse me with writer's block with one story, to then start another one???? Sigh. Whelp. That's just what happened with "Have You Seen Her."
          I DID start with another story and I have a few chapters lined up and ready to go. I  had posted it on my DeviantArt account some time ago, but after looking it over, the GT community seemed pretty dead. So , I'll try here. I should be posting it soon (bout a week). But first I need a cover and a good title. :-)
          Stay tuned!! 
          - ACR