Sharkuwu210

Hi! I just wanted to come on here and say that I really enjoyed your writing!  If you ever have some free time or need a break from writing be sure to check out my books! Keep on writing! I cannot wait to see what you write next!

Ani1318

@ Sharkuwu210  Ah, thank you so much! It makes me very happy to see people like you enjoying my writing! I'm currently taking a small break from both reading and writing but I'll make sure to check out your writing as well when I'll have time!
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TheStoryScholar

Thanks for being a faithful reader! Really appreciate it!
          I'm still reading your story. Haven't forgotten, just been really busy. 
          
          As far as Cosmos, I'm not continuing the story as of right now. If there's anything I can do to clarify the story or give a short synopsis, I'd be happy.

TheStoryScholar

@Ani1318 Thanks a lot! You too!
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Ani1318

@ StoryCoach  I seriously can't wait to see your story complete! It feels like a perfect mix of sci-fi and fantasy with a little bit of mystery for the protagonist. Thank you so much for explaining and keep up the good work!
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TheStoryScholar

@Ani1318 Not at all impolite! 
            
            So "sample" come to think of it now was probably not the best word to use. I meant it as a sample of my own writing ability (perhaps I'll change the term). In honesty, I'm saving because I plan to rework the plot. The story world its based in is massive (as with any scifi/fantasy). 
            
            So far you've probably gathered that the human empire in this story has emigrated from earth, but is also a hermit empire that refuses to explore the rest of the galaxy. They fear what is out there, which is why they built up their military so much. Well, our protagonist stands to inherit the throne to that empire, but she's about to learn (the hard way) just how much was kept secret from her. 
            
            The story was supposed to open into exploring the cosmos (hence the title) and its galaxies, but most importantly the protagonist needs to understand her power and where it came from.
            
            You see, she has the ability to control gravity (attraction). You find out later on that there are more like her who can control one of the 4 fundamental forces of the universe (Formation, Alteration, Interaction, Attraction). Only she can control attraction (gravity). So her purpose is to figure out why that is.
            
            That's just a rough idea, but I'm bound to change the premise. I already have ideas.
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