user894567

Hi!
          Just came across your profile and thus read your snippet, Dharma.
          I am here to just give a small suggestion, please do not take it otherwise. :)
          The concept sounds very promising, but the characters have the potential to be developed much more. The conversations among people could have more depth.Your writing style is fabulous. Otherwise, the plot according to the synopsis is interesting, and it is very much encouraged nowadays to explore new ideas and dimensions since the audience is always looking for something new.
          Just thought of putting it here, so that a different perspective is gained.
          All the best with your endeavours!
          Peace.

user894567

@AnirudhChakravarthy4 Hi. Oh, that sounds nice. Yes, Demon souls is great. Sure. I would be reading it.
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user894567

Hi. That sounds nice. Yes Demon souls is great. Sure, I will.
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user894567

Hi. That sounds nice. Yes Demon souls is great. Sure, I will.
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