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@steveisstillhot If you want some criticism, I'll say this: They're all short. It's okay if you wanted it short, but I feel that the way you bring up scenarios is basic at most (no offense). My criticism is to give your audience some sort of suspense to lead them to the big even (aka they fuck). I'm not saying to be professional, just have suspense to lead the reader. Also please work on formatting :((( if you didn't want the criticism, then ignore this lol :333