Hey A.A.M. I just read your poems book! A little bit if helpful adivce. I really liked your last two. However, although I liked your first two, they lacked depth. To help give them a bit more depth, try to go to a quiet place and just think for a minute. Dig into your head and pull out your emotions. Then, shape your emotions into a pen and start writing. You'll get your best peices this way. They'll have more depth and more relatable as well. I find this method helps me when I'm trying to write stories!
