Jenna

Here are a few changes I will be making to better the rewrite of “the Dissent” series:
          -Slower plot
               -Fight scenes more detailed
               -More description and fillers 
               -More character/plot development
          -Minor name changes 
               -Gabriel doesn’t go by Gabe
               -Cass’ full name isn’t emphasized as much but it is a more important aspect of the story
               -Cass’ last name is Belcourt instead of Belacourt
               -Ryella is now Rya
               -Dakota and Rya’s last name is now Connelly
          -Age changes 
               -Cass is now 16
               -Gabriel is now 18
               -The Connellys are twins and they are 16
          -Somewhat major background changes 
               -Dakota is adopted 
               -Dakota is nerdy (but I love him anyway)
               -The Dissenters are fighting the royal family who has forced the country into poverty instead of the government who has done the same thing
               -Cass wanted for theft, assault and battery, escaping custody, and murder
               -Cass isn’t homeless (not exactly) and she never knew her parents
               -Caden Pierce doesn’t exist
               -Cass and Gabriel’s relationship doesn’t jump into friendship that quickly, they have a very rocky coexistence
               -Cass and Gabriel are damaged and closed-off
          -Relationship changes
               -Cass and Dakota will be good friends and she will experience no attraction to him
               -The Dissent is much smaller and made up only of kids and young adults
               -Joseph Cullen (Connelly) was killed before the book takes place
          
          I can’t wait for everyone to read it!
          

Hey guys! I know I’ve been on a hiatus for awhile and I would like to formally apologize and explain myself. I know I have so many stories on the go right now and haven’t been updating any of them. I feel like I should let you all know that I plan to discontinue many of my stories. However, I would like to discuss my series, “the Dissent”. When I initially wrote it, I was much younger and the quality of it suffered greatly. I rushed the first two books too much and now I have no motivation to write the third which is a big problem, because I know the avid readers want closure and quality. So, in light of this situation, I have decided to formally rewrite the novels. I want to make them more like an actual young adult trilogy, as I feel my readers deserve such a series. The progress of the first book rewrite is moving very well, it is already much better. I intend to post the entire story all at once to compensate for the waiting I have forced upon all of you. I’m very sorry for the suspense and low quality. 
          -Athenasgirl12

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