anchoredstyles
Hii ! I'm so sorry for being a bother but if you have the time, would you mind taking a look at my new story "Two Is Better Than One" ? I'd really appreciate the feedback. It'd mean a lot, thank you so much (:
AvoniZ
@anchoredstyles Hey, I went through it and I think you have a good story going on there. I found a few mistakes, but overall your idea is cohesive. I started editing on my phone... but I realized I couldn't send pictures... If you want, I can edit what you have so far, but it would have to be through Gmail or some other platform. Otherwise, I really like your story! Keep up the good work!
