Aziraphael

@roxxy2o9 All good I was having trouble too.

IsuruAbeysinghe

I decided to fan you, even though your unedited work is still a little rough in places, I think your originality and concept, as well as the way you describe (imagery) and build the characters is promising. It's also a little dark which I'm sort of into. I think you might like my book when you get around to reading it, there are some overlapping themes of dystopia and apocolypse, factionalization of humanity and struggle. This has a lot of potential - and I'm only up to chapter 4.