
Blite0798
Hey Delta, I have some questions. I'm planning to make my own crossover fanfiction with MLAATR, it's a Kamen Rider Faiz X My Life As A Teenage Robot btw. With my own OC. What should I do to start off the prolouge? My plan was to start it with Jenny, Brad and Tuck was just walking around the neighbourhood of Tremorton in the night on their way home from all the ruckus of Jenny fighting evil robots. At that time as well, Jenny's energy level is really low due to all the fighting she's been done. But then a monster or a bad robot (if you wanna suggest what kind of monster it is) attacks them. Jenny would try to hold off the monster while Tuck and Brad get to safety but because of Jenny's low energy level, she lost to the monster and when the monster charged towards Brad and Tuck. Brad tried to defend Tuck but got knocked out unconcious instead by the monster. Just as Tuck closes his eyes bracing for the attack from the monster as it got closer to him, Kamen Rider Faiz appeared by pushing off the monster far away from Tuck with a strong kick. Jenny would try to get herself up back can't due to her low energy level only able to see the fight between the mysterious armored hero (Faiz) and the monster, she would only able to get a few look of the Rider. Tuck saw Jenny tried gettin up and would come to her aid while bringing his unconcious brother to Jenny. After Faiz managed to defeat the monster, he would try to approached the trio. But Tuck still scared, would try to threathened the Rider. But he ended up passing out due to being scared and jenny also powers off. Faiz would bring trio on his motorcycle back to each of their house back. The next day, Jenny would wake up with a shock, she would remember the night but Nora managed to calm her down. And thats it. Sorry for the long paragraph. I'm still figuring the rest of the story. So what do you think?

BigDaddyDelta2
@Blite0798 I say go for it, man. But if it were me, I'd add a bit more realism to it...well as much as you can have in that world. But that's just my writing style. What i mean by that is like, do they know each other or was he just walking around the streets of tremorton at night fir some reason? What is he? Is he a human, or is he also a robot? If he's a human, I'd say there should be a least a struggle going on between the monster or robot and your OC. Or if he's a robot like Jenny, then he should have no problem. Also, if they didn't know each other beforehand, how'd he know where they lived? Stuff like that, you know? But like I said, you should go for it and flex that creative muscle in your head. I'm rooting for you, man!
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