BlueYoshi

I’m back in the saddle

Still alive and working on Chapter 10, thank you for your patience 

I’m kind of in the middle of a hiatus to handle stuff in my life so I couldn’t make progress on the story at a rate I wanted to. Apologies. 

U good mate?

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Hello @BluYoshiiii !
          
          I wasn't planning on commenting, but i think i have to.
          
          Your story is, without hesitation, the best Twice x manager, wait, the best Twice fanfiction in general i could find. Since you said you wanted reviews, i will try to make one, but i don't know where to begin, actually.
          
          The length of the episodes makes them really pleasant to read ! Because they are long, it allows us to take our time to appreciate the story, the character's development...
          
          You seem to have a huge knowledge about Twice since you added various anectodes about Twice's history that, i think, only a real Once could know.
          
          Your writing style is interesting and unique. You know how to end chapters well, how to make your dialogues easy to read, give them a fun, serious, or even sad tone...
          
          The main character, Y/N (you could have found a more original name, i saw it already in various fanfictions ) has a fascinating backstory, which makes him even more believable.
          
          There's no rush. It's not like with a chapter you jump a year or even just a month, you take your time, which adds more credibility.
          
          It's great to see an (at least for the moment) "innocent" but mature as well (like when jihyo is doubtful about what Y/N did with Mina) fanfiction. (I found the other fanfictions either disgusting either childish.)
          
          Your fanfiction is like a drug.
          Truly, when i begin a chapter, i have to go through its entirety and begin the one that follows, and you're not even using cliffhangers !
          
          We can't be sure 'bout what will follow. Since (particularly in chapter 7) you open a lot of doors to the story, we can create as much scenarios as we want, and can't be sure about the right one. That's for me a key for a good story.
          
          Anyway, i could write a list probably as long as one of the chapters of your fanfic () but i think i'l stop right here.
          Thanks for these 7 chapters, i will surely follow the story and read the others as soon as they are published.
          Good luck, have a nice 2024
          Merci !
          
          
          

Hi @BluYoshiiii , how have you been doing? 
          
          Thanks for your writing so far. The writings are so expressive, beautifully articulated, and pleasant to read.
          
          Hope to see you soon!
          
          Take care!
          
          Your new reader.

I am back on the writing grind, appreciate the patience! Life's just gotten busier and it's been harder than imagined to find the time and energy to write.
          
          The good news is that I have the next 11 chapters planned out so it's just a matter of getting them written and uploaded. I just gotta hold myself to stay consistent with it.

Taking a mini-break from writing at the moment, appreciate your love for the story so far!

Really good story man you’re a truly amazing writer can’t wait to see more from you! especially since it’s hard to find a good story on this app