@Bonnie1973
If anyone is interested, I have posted my completed middle grades novel. I’d be very happy if some people would be willing to read it.
It’s called The Kindness Quest and is a quest based fantasy with mythological references.
Thanks for your consideration.
Thank you so much for adding Oathbreaker to your reading list. I hope you enjoy it. Have a great day! :-)
@Bonnie1973 Thanks for reading The Culled Crown and adding it to your reading list. I hope you enjoy Monroe’s story. :) Your support means the world to me!
You’ve got a good idea and the characters are relatable. It still needs some editing but that can come later.
Hello, Bonnie;
Thank you for adding my 'Posted As Missing' to your reading list. This is the first volume of a five-book series, the fifth one still being drafted. I hope you enjoy them, and if you have any questions, please feel free to ask me.
Cheers,
Michael
Perfect. However your grammar is, refreshingly, excellent, so nothing to worry about there. Thank you
Thanks. I look for adult authors and I’m looking forward to reading it. I’m an English and history teacher - would you rather I read silently or comment on spelling, grammar and/or plot holes. Some people would rather not know and I wouldn’t want to offend accidentally.
Hey! I was just wondering if you could possibly spare some time to check out my book, The Silver Sceptre, as I'm strugglimg right now with getting more votes and comments! If so, thank you so, so much, you have no idea how much it means to me! Once again, thank you and bye!
I’ve read the first two chapters and there are too many inconsistencies for me to continue. I do wish you luck though and if you have another later draft you’d like me to look at, I would be happy to do that.
I’ll look it over but as a start I’d say you want a stronger blurb when it first comes up. I wouldn’t have opened it from that alone.
I’ll make comments as a read. If you don’t actually want them then let me know and I’ll stop. (Some people don’t want constructive criticism)
Thank you so much for your insight and constructive criticism on "Daughters of the King" and for spending so much time giving me advice/feedback on it! I really appreciate it : )
@Bonnie1973 Yes it is in editing stage! I am now starting to make the changes you suggested :) they are really helpful! Thanks again ❤️
Yeah for sure!! That would be great! I haven’t had time to edit my book yet but I really appreciate your comments they are so helpful! ❤️
Do you want me to continue giving you this degree of comments? I can but some people don’t really want to hear it even if they have asked.
Hey! Would you mind checking out my historical fiction/romance book "Daughters of the King"? I would appreciate that so much!
Thanks <3
Glad to see you were successfully published. Congratulations!
Hello @Bonnie1973 ! Thank you for reading and voting for The Lost Valor of Love. It's nice to meet you :)
I'm so pleased you are enjoying the book and I'm very happy to pass muster with a history and English teacher! :)
I’m very impressed. I almost never need to think about how it is written because it is always grammatically correct and well worded. The characters are appealing and as a history and English teacher I appreciate your attention to detail.
This is one of the best books I have read on Wattpad.
I hope you get manage to get it published eventually.
Good luck!
Thanks for your comments throughout my book Shift! It's always helpful when someone points out the small errors you've managed to overlook for seven years of writing O_O Hope you enjoyed the story as well!
If I take the time to correct your grammar it means there is a manageable amount. I’m a high school English teacher and the instinct to correct is strong. I read your full book and commented so to me that means you’ve got a pretty good start here. Congratulations on finishing it.