Shadow Knight

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So far so good. You still make basic mistakes in punctuation, spelling, and structure but I can see you improved your skills. I feel more interested in the plot of the story than the last despite loving the pair bumbleby and being hesitant when it comes to OCs. Feel free to ask me to critique anything else.

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Intro published prologue will soon as possible https://www.wattpad.com/story/143415405

While I do think you’re writing skills could use some work, I’m not the most qualified to help with this. My only experience with writing outside of school involves overlooking projects one of my best friends make because her dream is to be an author. If you want help, I would suggest looking elsewhere.

Hi. I just wanted to thank you for adding my story "Breathe" to your list. It means the world to me. I hope you enjoy the story as it progresses. Feel free to give feedback as this is my first book. Thanks again! :)
          
           

Thanks so much for adding my book to your reading list! Please give feedback on what you think of it. Hope you enjoy it~~

Will get more chapters written soon https://www.wattpad.com/story/141078764

This is only the first chapter I will post when I can feedback is most appreciated https://www.wattpad.com/story/140756562